Hi Yezall
Read your book,enjoyed it.
Had the feeling you were going to reveal who was the Master,as I read it.Guess it was also the thoughts of Callie too.

Kevin

First for taking the time to read it and also for understanding it. Although not as harsh as you may think.

I have more to upload but they are along the same lines. I am working on a larger book with more story I hope to up load it as well; maybe by chapters.

I already knew great minds think alike... :)

I cant wait until you get to read my...um "Other Book'!! We think alike girl.!! Great book...want more...

You could use a little more clarifications on some of your action movements..example:" he pulled her up by her arms"...yet I think she is still tied with her hands behind her...so I would say, "he grasped her by her bound elbows and pulled her up so that she stood before him." I liked it and truely had me imagining her anticipation of his abductions and her confusion over it...