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That was good! Some minor spelling errors, but good. Nice touch with Seth's crush. Wow. Im impressed with that bit. I would'nt have dared to do such a thing! Oh, there are also a few grammar errors, like 'littler'...it should be 'younger' or 'smaller'..and she doesn't age like a human, so she wouldn't be eleven or twelve or sixteen or whatever. at least, not in years. try going more for months. remember: She aged three years in three months. so, when the last flashback occurred, she would be about one or two years. and Bella already has a control on her temper. But, other that those things, its really good! Keep writing it!