I'm loving all the twists in people's work today. I really thought this was good. This type of writing is my favourite things i like to read. I enjoyed it over and over. Some people struggle as a writer because only other writers will like their work but i think a wider audience of people who just read will love it too.

John
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That was wickedly ironic at the end Meli, loved that twist. Very well drawn up to a neat twist.

ha ha you got to update this i can see this is going to be good!! oh man let me know if you add more to this i feel so dirty ha ha its so worth righting more about!! i dont know what i would do if i told some one and thay fanted ha haid probaly poke them with a stick knowing me... ha ha good read!! thanks!

You DEF got me but I liked this, it was well written ^^

lol, your really got me. I didn't know if I was sick for reading it!

awesome:) I din't see that lol, I thought it was going to be different:)

Meli,
I really enjoyed this story. I love the twist, twist at the end. Excellent writing. :)

did not c tht comming!
fanfablytastic!

did not c tht comming!
fanfablytastic!

you have in your story. I, if I wrote this, would not apologize in the afterword. In fact, there would not have been an afterword.

I'm saving this...p