That was a REALLY unexpected twist. You got me!

Really good presentation of the story.
Great Job

Prakash

i woulda fainted too if I was the priest lol

Really good build up before resolution. Wouldn't mind seeing something like this in a movie but more elaborated such as showing her fall in love with Ryan then etc etc. Good 5/5

Yeah...you got me! LMAO :)

I enjoy a story with a twist at the end. Good job!

I really thought I had this one, but then it changed, and I thought, aha! Now I've got it! But nope. You gave it another little twist and voila! I was completely surprised. As Greg pointed out, some editing is needed, but dang, this is one awesome, clever story! Great job!

you really had me going. i didn't know how this would end. a vary good read.

loved it!!

@princessoftheheart, @foreverworks, @hawaa.r : Glad you liked the unexpected twist. Yay! Thank you for the comment!

@greghuber: Thank you so much for the feedback. I will work on the edited version and hopefully it will be much better. Thank you for taking the time to comment.

Bravo! Great twist and well written. I can't ask for anything else. You definitely got me.