oh man, I did NOT see that coming! Awesome job!

Nice twist with the humor. I like your style.

Love it, first I thought the girl loved her brother. Ha ha you got me. :)

Thank you Linda8719 for not killing me quite yet. Glad I got you too and that you enjoyed it! :D my mission is complete.

You are sick and twisted, but i love it! Well played madam, well played. and that poor priest!! Hate to say it but I was fooled. I expected some kind of nasty incest going. Lol. I am huge fan of your work I hope you post more stories like this one. I won't kill you because otherwise I wont get to read more books like this :p

This was very cleverly done I did not get a hint of the ending .What a surprise and a laugh

@konrage- Thanks so much!! I'm glad you liked the twists. I was hoping I did not give to much hints throughout the story. Thanks for reading!!

@felixthecat --- Thank you so much for reading and reviewing too. And YAY!! I got you woot!

You both just made my day!

Yep, you had me going...and that priest!
I liked your "surprise" ending, Meli. "Ah...what the heck!" Lol.