Excellent! Your descriptive writing kept me on edge. Great story.

Graphic...descriptive,put you right in the moment of the attack.Could picture the event as it happened. Grewsome. Loved it! Great talent.

The part where the girl was frozen and was just waiting for the door to open really sent me into shivers.I can't imagine how my face would look if that part of the story was turned into a movie and I was watching.

The part where the girl was frozen and was just waiting for the door to open really sent me into shivers.I can't imagine how my face would look if that part of the story was turned into a movie and I was watching.

@nfernando Wow! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I was blown away. And I will definitely try it. Thank you for taking the time to comment and read :D

Hi Melissa. Were it not for the glowing review Tom gave you, I would have stayed way, way away from your story. I hate anything to do with blood, knives or killing and avoid horror movies like the plague. However, his review drew me in and I cautiously turned your pages, hiding my eyes (just in case something awful would happen) and it did!! Wow. Yet something about your story moved me, and I found it not to be the gratuitous blood-letting of other stories, but rather one with a heroine who had feelings and one that I could relate to. I agree with Tom wholeheartedly. There are a few places where you need to fix your grammar or even the words you used, but they are minor. The "thrust" of your story shone through and I am now a fan!

@demoncheez Thanks for reading and commenting on it. I'm so glad you liked it. I enjoyed your book too!

Thank you everyone for your kind words and stars. It truly makes me happy and wants to make me keep on writing.

I loved the way you brought me into her world. So many of us take the ability to speak for granted. It made me think, thank you!

Your story was good but may give me nightmares.I kept thinking you were dreaming. Serena