GOOD job, Meli. You plotted a very tense, graphic horror story. This is a nice example of very good writing. I enjoyed it, blood and all!
It reminds me so much of poetry in an eerie way...... So decriptive..... xx
It reminds me so much of poetry in an eerie way...... So decriptive..... xx
Thank you so very much for taking the time to let me know your thoughts. It makes me so happy to know that it was well received. It truly means a lot :)
I was truley moved by your last paragraph, amazing story,it was breath taking
Weird story -well written.
Yes... I tend to have that weirdness in me. It was a weird dream that I had too. Thank you for reading!!!! And thank you so much for complimenting the writing.
I really enjoyed it. I love how you until the end what she was dealing with. It was so sad that she was also mute, that must feel horrible. I like your style and specially your descriptions.
You should continue writing more short stories like this one. Maybe for each of the neighbors? I would love to read more of your stories! Keep writing.
Why Thank you so much. I do appreciate you taking the time to read and specially the time you took to comment! :-)