Nice work for your first try in English. There were a couple of places- on pg 6 you say "ahead the computer monitor" when I think you mean "on top."

On pg 8 you used "tall" and I think you meant "tail."

Other than those two little things, you did a great job. I love Pischel, and his name. You do a wonderful job of writing through his eyes. Very nice. A cup and a star for you.

Thanks Raimund

I love cats and Pischel too! -:)

Star and cup!

Greetings

Raimund