Hauntingly well told/written tale. Truly deserving a win.

I loved it! Not a wasted word, and the way she awoke from the dream...

Suggestion? Increase the font size against that grainy paper, a little hard to read.

It is a dramatic story told so well as you don't fill up the pages. You just tell a hauntingly beautiful story of a ghost.

A recurring dream, a start of many short stories but a wonderful plot, well told. Congratulations on your win, and thank you for making it available for me to read. Good job. I note you have several books for sale. I have two, the midnight bandit and The Christmas theif -both good reads. READERS TAKE NOTE.

I appreciate your sweet thoughts, ladies.

As an author you have maintained suspense from the beginning to the end of the story. It has helped the story to be tight and packed with tense moments. The story moves on smoothly like the flow of a transparent stream. Congrats once again.

Loved the mystery surrounding it. The ending was perfect to such a tragic story.

Well done I breezed through your story, and I too wondered what was the cause of her nightmares.Serena