I appreciate your thoughts. I've been there, just like everyone else. Trust me. Lol!

I think that you did a great job on this poem. I know I have seen peoples relationship after years of being married and it breaks my heart..You have done a wonderful job describing this :)

It could be talking about lovers that have only been married for a short period of time. However it made me feel that the lovers have been together much longer than just a few years. I love the rhyming u installed. When I write poems I try this but it just doesn't turn out that way most of the time.

Great job I loved this one very much : )