I enjoyed the story very much. Quite my kinda stuff. You have my vote.

The trouble with short stories is they always leave you wanting more! The ending was great. GOOD JOB!

really great story

Chilling! Extremely well-told, too! A thoroughly enjoyable read that got my vote!

I loved reading your story.
You have my vote.
Chris

Well written and you have successfully captured the tense moments.

Here I am bringing you my vote. Serena

You've certainly mastered the art of suspense! I voted without hesitation.

Hauntingly great. Got my vote.
Love the cover.

on my tally sheet. Good story, Melissa.