Wow! Thank you everyone for reading and commenting so favorably on my book. I never anticipated so many responses to my little short story. I sincerely apppreciate your thoughts very much.
I should thank you Melissa for your funny tribute to my cover designs ....lol
Good story. You built tension but let it down a couple of times. Keep escalating that tension. It a good story and I enjoyed reading it.
Definately bone chilling... but I was happy at the end that Caroline was okay :-)
Loved it! Great as usual...no, wait... even better than usual, which is hard to believe. Short, but needs not be any longer. Stated all that was to be said, no more, no less.
Laz
This reads like A Twilight Zone segment. Very good. I loved it!
This is a great read! It gave me gooseumps. Great plot. It would make a great novel. Keep writing!
This is great writing! Your descriptions are excellent. Keep it up./joeparente