Wow, Melissa! This is your best piece yet! Really. Short, succinct, filled with tension and excellent prose! I'm stoked!

Thank you for inviting me to read it!

Misery (Me) likes your work, it is god, short though, maybe it could be deeer.

I loved your short story grabbed me from the first, very good. Serena

It was tastefully written but somehow...hurried. Why so short? I think you could sit down and really give this story some depth. Answer some of the questions this short story leaves behind that would really shock. See you...soon. MUHAHAHAHA.

Nice xD
Very very nice :D
Vivien

good : )

Keep up the great work! Best wishes. Thanks for sharing. =-)

I think this is a great read. I was hooked from the start. I wish I could get people to resd my book. I see you have many readers. How did you do it? I will highly recommend your book to everyone.My book is Abel in Paris, a romantuc comedy. I just have the first 5 chapters online. I am new to this so I am just not sure what I should be doing? I read anything that looks interesting and the title is what cathced me frst. That is what drew me toyour book. Also I liked your cover.

How do I join groups to get critiques and for others to even open my book for a page or two.

I am going to tell my friends to go online to read your book also. You have been one of the beest writers so far to me at least.

I also listed twoother books and ut the first 3 chapters or so online. I have a fourth that I will add tooday. I like to write and have many books to list in the future and to add. The new one is also a romantic comedu UNFINISHED SYMPHONY. I hope to make these books into screen plays also because I think they would make good films. I have been an actor for 35 years and have been in so many productions so I think I can see what makes a good film or stageplay.

I sure hope your book gets more recognition and if I don;t win or place I sure hope you do. Keep on working. I'd like to read more of your works.'
Thanks,
Jeffrey Allen White

I must say...Your story was phenomenal. I loved it