Love It!!!

Nice job Melissa,

You built the tension up nicely. The story is tight and flows easily so that the reader wants to continue. Laz sais your in the contest Which book is that? I couldn't find the link to "Whispers On The Line" to vote for the contest.
Jack

p.s.

I do have six books liated in my profile
The link below is in the contest.

http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-jack-nudel-vladek

I loved the story, it reaches out like the caller on the phone and captures your attention. I like the suspense it presents to the reader.

David
Fan of Melissa