Its really good but in the beginning you should check your punctuation because some periods should be commas, and also your are missing some capitalization, BUT other than that it was fantastic!
It's a great start and your blurb has one of the best hooks I have ever read. Nice job and you should definitely continue.
Thank you so much!!!!
I love this book. Especially these awesome animals.
ha ha
updated this book...if you wanna check it out...
finished chapter two...please check it out.
There are no words to describe Beyond The Wall. It's just wonderful!!!
I agree with you E.K.
meee tooo
THank you!!!!!
Thank you!!!