Nicely done! A good story with just the right amount of suspense. I enjoyed your entry.

A good one. At least no one died in this one...lol.

Thanks John, I was hoping to keep the reader going until the end. I'm glad it worked.

Hello Lenora

Thank you for the kind comment. Of course I was disappointed not to place, but this one was fun to write.

You got me on that one. Incorporated the prompt nicely into the story, and did not spin a tale of monsters, aliens or time travel (which I was expecting), but presenting a "normal" possibility in a suspenseful manner.

Nicely done!

Good job keeping us in suspense until the end. I just knew that pile of clothes was going to move eventually!