Lol! I lurv how (even though she's in pain and crying her eyes out) Delilah has time to pick out a coordinating outfit ;D

that's it (mouth opened) more!!!
but over all it was good I liked it. :)

i loved it you should write more !!

I LOVE IT ^-^

Daniel, I love Daniel! What more can I say? An overprotective brother, like I haven't seen that before? I enjoyed how you explained the characters in detail. It made me imagine how they looked and what they did. (Personality wise). But what I would have to say is to try to use synonyms for your words. I see same words alot in your sentences. Eg : Delilah felt like collapsing and at the same time Aaron says he was trying to keep from collapsing maybe about three times. Thats just an error everyone makes. Alot. So don't fret about it.
A perverted Summer is very interesting with a bit of humor that I most definitely appreciate. The conflict and plot is fantastic just try to revise your work at some point. Not to many grammatical errors so I can see that you either have experience or your just naturally talented. I'll go with the second one. Good job and keep up the good work, I will be bragging to my friends about your book and consider it one of my favorites. :)

Crystal

love this sooooo much

keep going ill be patiently waiting

love it

Wow Great Job One Of my fav books now lol thanks keep continuing the storys :D

loved it make another