You're poetry is lovely. I can feel the sadness, too. Much like when I was young and longed for love. I found it, at last, inside myself!

I really adore the poem, "Mom's Story". (Did I get the title right?)

i realli lik the poems u wrote it is really sweet and beautiful to me me and my mom said u should be an author (=

Your mom told me to check this out and im only 11 and i've had a poem of mine published in a book, and one day i hope o be as good as you are Ms. Vannesa. Your work is beautiful and desparing. I hope you create more to the story and a new masterpeice as well.

---B.J.W <3

congratulation, Vanessa (I have a lovely niece named Vanessa), your verse is sensitive and convincing. Go ahead, you're a good poet.
Albert Russo

Your poems are well written. I was truly caught up in the emotions portrayed. Adding to my favorites. Tammie

Being a mistress or the other woman is quite painful if you sincerely love the man. But it is more heartbreaking on the part of the wife or the girlfriend to be betrayed by someone you love and trusted so much. I guess letting go, even how hard it may be, might be able to correct a bad decision to enter into a wrong relationship. Letting go might be able to re-direct the person into the right path of recovery.

I like your poem on “My Daughter” because it depicts the feeling of a person growing up without a father. In reality, situations such as this can sometimes be a reason why some women fall into temptation of falling in love with married or unavailable men. They might be looking for somebody with a father figure to fill the emptiness in their childhood days.

Thumbs up to your amazing poetry!

Very tender. Loved your poems. Bravo!

OMG Vanessa, you have a talent for reaching into the soul of your subject. Beautiful work. Got my vote. Charlie

Vanessa,

There is nothing more I can say than what others have already said. My comments on your poem on Manet's panting apply to this one as well. Reading them made my heart feel sad and glad and that what poetry is all about. If you have the time and inclanation, I have a book of poems on the link below.

http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-jack-nudel-poetry-potpourri

Jack

Really it is pain to be another woman.You have depicted very good thoughts .To be another woman is a curse & we should focus for our partner to be totally dedicated to her wife/husband & the family.The most sufferer are the kids of future world & the live with a complex.