Read it again...voted

Excellent. Touching and sad.

Great work, Vanessa.
I'm jealous, I wish I could rhyme so well. This is written so clearly that I hope it isn't taken from first hand experience.
Laz

Vanessa, Vanessa this is great. Why don't you submiit these in the Love, Anti-Love Poetry Contest starting 2-14 going to the 25th. You should enter both. I love them madly...........wowwww. Great poetic ryhme.............nice.

Kind Regards,
Fred

Your writing has the power to bring out subtle emotions beautifully. Keep it up!

Very moving poetry. I really liked it a lot.