PLZ UPDATE
u havent updated in like years
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i love it keep going plz

To be truthful I wanted Nick to just punch the crap out of Louis.... not that it would have been a good ending but damn would have been great. Just saying there were a few bits in the story that you didn't spell correct other than that it was a great ending loved it.

Kaza Dalla

update soon?

I love this book. I want Louis to end up with axel and Nick to find some other great girl that he likes even more than axel

Is it the end or what cause thats what it looks like can someone please tell me if its the end or not Thank you and great book BTW!!!

I have to say it took a long time but it was worth it i loved it and that her and Nick will be together you so need to make another story about them :)

This is vaguely the scenario I am going thru right now.... only not with a rock star. It does need some editing work still but the last few chapters I feel really hit hard the emotions that bot of them were going thru. I am going to save this story, and post it on facebook!

thank you so much for the comment/review i really appreciate it!

and to answer your questions:
1. he didnt beat her up. he was the one trying to stop the other three from beating her up.
2. well she was afraid. since they beat her up so bad the first time, they could kill her for ruining her reputation.
3. a few months. i thought it said that somewhere in there...

im really glad you asked these questions though, i will go back and edit so that these points are more clear!

and yes i'm trying to get myself to update more often, actually.

i think that this story is really well written, it flows so well that i read the entire thing without even realizing! it's so funny the way she views her mom and the world - like a dark comedy.
i was a little confused about a couple of things though:
1. why does she fall for Nick after he beats her up? that doesn't make any sense.
2. why doesn't she tell Louis right away when she messages him, where she is and to send help? or at least try to get help from somebody in the hotel. if she is enjoying being held captive, then you need to hint at that a little more.
3. how long is she with the band? by the end of what i read, they were already calling each other babe and hun and it seemed too soon.

are you going to add more soon? i'm curious as to what's going to happen!
let me know!