I've only read the first chapter so far.

I wouldn't tell you the book was good, if it wasn't, but I think you have done a wonderful job of catching the reader's interest.

So far it flows well, and I do not see any errors in English or spelling.

Altogether very well written.

Yes i am! i work on this thing everyday. i believe i started in the end of january/beginning of february and im already halfway done. i say i'll have this all finsihed up by the end of april or beginning of may

then its off to another story im eager to start

I love it! Are you going to write more?

I love this. Your writing really draws me in because it is the closest i've come to a piece of writing that is like the way i write. I want too read more. I noticed kind of small elements that reminded me of a film called "The fountain" by darren afronsky. I like loves quest of finding each other again through the many journeys of life to be together. A happy or sad ending will be up to you, but love will always work out for the best whatever happens. Can't wait for more...

I love the mystery of it, the unanswered questions that it raises. You write in such a way that it caught my attention and held it until the end. It's a great start and I'm ready for more