Not to sound harsh, but I would recommend making the font a little larger. I really want to read it, but It's hurting my eyes to squint at it!

I think the one you saw before was an earlier version (with less chapters). I just updated it by adding more chapters and changed a few words... its still the same.. :D

It works now. I have a question, though. Did you possibly post this or something like it once before? Because the story is really, really familiar - the whole thing about this being writing a special poem and him having to resist killing someone...I don't know. The names are even familiar. But it's not exactly the same, and seems to be told from a slightly different angle. Is this a rewrite of something you submitted earlier?

You are at the level of either J. K. Rowling
or Jules Verne or H. G. Wells or Victor
Hugo on writing!

I changed the file... i think it should work now...

I tried clicking "download" then chose the PDF version and it worked... though the formatting (namely the spacing) went haywire... and the background image (just an old style paper to give and old english feeling) was gone.. but all the text was there.. have you tried that ma'am?

I wanted to read your story, but when I came to this page to open it, it wouldn't respond. I don't know why the book won't open, but you might want to check with Lineh or someone on the BookRix team about the problem. Please let me know when this gets resolved so I can check it out - it sounds like a really good story.

~Judy C.