I love the book so far and please keep writing. Let me know when u update it, thanks!!!

Great story, it takes almost half of me. It creates a pain in my heart. I do hope for the best for Young Serenity to be a winner in the end, and find someone who cares about her. :) All I wish for her is to be happy. I really love the story. :D

Great beginning. I really like this story. It is quick to draw attention and never lets it go. I wouldn't be surprised if it's on a best-seller list when you finish it.

I love the way in which this book is written from the heart and immediately draws the reader in, leaving them begging for more.
With a quick edit this great story could positively glow.

Plz write more! I'm begging you!

Very sad, but very well done. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Amazing! I almost cried! <3333 Realllllly great job! :)))

You do an amazing job telling this story!! I don't want to write any spoilers so I'll just say it really drew me in! It definitely left me wanting to read chapter 2.

Um.. wow. I love the plot line of this. I was nearly to tears when she held the teddy bear. Good job! And hurry up!