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good2helper82

awesome girl write more

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joeparente

This was a good book. i wish you had written more. You have some spelling issues but not bad. A quick read by you will correct them. Great story start./joeparente

Hi,

I'd like to recommend you to take a look at the following book found on BookRix:

http://www.bookrix.com/_mybook-joeparente_1289855934.2114710808

Bye...
joe

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david.wood

Nice start for the first chapter, a few typos, but nice so far.
I love the cover picture.