Very well written. I love this period in history and can't wait for your story to continue. Much success to you

I thank you for reading and, i hope enjoying my story.
Thanks for the votes too. You made my day today.

well written..hope to read more similar type books..keep up good work

Enjoyed this very much, A well written historical story. You have my vote.

Carol x

Thankyou for taking time out to read and for the advice and vote. I'm working out these little imperfections for the next story.
Thanks so much.

I thought your story very well written, keep it up.My vote Serena

I thought your story very well written, keep it up.My vote Serena

The pressure is on for the next story! (Wipes brow)
Thanks so much for the great comments and the votey-hearty type thing. I appreciate it loads, thanks.
:)

Keep your eyes peeled. I'm working on it.
:)

Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to give your advice.
Your points are well taken and, rest assured, i'll file them in my brain for future reference. I'll have a little clean up soon.
I'm really glad you liked it and thankyou for the vote and the heart.