Ahhhhhh!
I am familiar with wonderful music, and the way you used the variety of terms to build this passionate piece, soto voce:), was splendid. Excellent! It shows a mind and pen that have united and...well, created a beautiful adagio:)
I loved this one.

WOW! So beautiful, yet sad.
Have I known you in some past lifetime?

Thank you so much. Like I put this is my first attempt here and feedback like that is good for the butterflys :)

Thanks Sweetie.

This poem is very deep and a thought provoking one. The words are hard to keep out of your head while u are reading it. That's just how deep this poem truly is.

Great job
also good luck in the contest. I am now worried going up against this poem.

Your friend
Angela Priest