I remembered to come back and give you my vote. Serena

to vote...make me laugh or make me cry...make me feel..you get a vote...p

@ pstarr59 – I really appreciate your feedback. I’ll try to review it, except if you are referring to a sentence using a comma before the word “too.” For instance, “I missed you too.” and “I missed you, too.” with or without a comma are both acceptable. In this case, the writer has the option to decide. But I’ll try to reread it for any errors. Thank you for checking out my e-book.

@ felixthecat – Thank you Patrick. It’s good to hear from you. I really appreciate your comment.

@ peterpiper – Thank you for checking out my e-book and adding it to your favorites (heart sign).

@parisjohn – You’ve shared a nice quote from Dr. Samuel. Just like him as well as with other writers, I wanted to share some words of wisdom to ponder on that might inspire everybody in their life; but most of all, it is for all readers to pause for a moment and reflect on God’s teachings. I hope this e-book serves it purpose. Thank you for checking this out, and I really appreciate your comment.

Have a great weekend everybody! :-D

A very nicely underplayed near-death encounter, Tina. Cheers to you:) I never thought of David and Goliath in quite that way. You wrote a very fast-paced story with a definite good message:)

@ paula – When I was editing the story, I later realized it made me cry too. haha . . . That’s when I decided to enter it in our contest. I’m glad that it also touched your heart.

@ serene – Every time I write something, I try to think of those people who might be suffering that I want to share even just a little inspiration in life. I hope it will inspire every reader of Bookrix.

@ Lee (dajee) – Thank you for pointing out my mistake. I really appreciate. I noticed it when I was editing my word count from 1006 to 1000. I also deleted and changed some words such as from “large boxes of groceries” to “boxes of groceries” and “I heard the doctor exclaimed” to “I heard voices exclaimed” to comply with our word count. By the way, the manner you write your comment is an example of a good style of giving critiques.

@ jesusdiedforme989 - McKenna, I’m happy that you like it. Just like your username, indeed, Jesus died for us to be saved. Let’s continue to share this inspiration to others.

@ junie – I’m glad you like it. It motivates me to write more every time I receive comments from other experienced writers. Thank you for clicking the heart sign. I really appreciate it.

@ gurashlak – Yes, this is entirely a product of my imagination. I hope you like it. :-D

@ janice (storyteller4) - It is flattering to receive such comment from a published author like you. You encourage me to write more.

@ joe – I’m happy to read such comment from you. I hope others will feel the same way, too. Thank you for clicking the heart sign. I really appreciate it.

Friends, thank you for checking out my e-book. I really appreciate all your comments. Have a great week!

This was a beautiful message!

Keep me reading to the end. Good story. keep writing more

Imagination of being with those who left abode,good efforts.

That was quite a story and I felt for you character. You made her so real to me and I too got a little teary eyed.Well done.Serena

You caught that experience very well...I know...p