A well-written story with implicit messages. Thnx for sharing.

My first e-book, The Journey in Life was included in the Top Ten Finalist (5th rank) under the Family Short Story Category contest.

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For those who haven’t read it, please do check it out. You may still click the “star” sign if you like it.

Please do share whatever lessons you may learn from the story.

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Hi kingfisher,

I really appreciate your comment. It didn’t cross my mind to preach when I wrote this story. Actually, I just wanted to share how the characters faith, courage and love helped them to survive their trials in life. It was good to know that you were not bothered too much. I hope other readers would feel the same way, too.

I use the American English when I write something. I know that there are differences in the English languages. Here are some examples:
1) American English - behavior
Other spelling - behaviour
2) American English - noticeably
Other spelling - noticably
3) American English - offense
Other spelling - offence
4) American English - organization
Other spelling - organisation

I learned that there are differences when writers use punctuations whenever they write a story. For instance, most Americans use comma before “too”. (I like orange chiffon cake, too.) Others don’t use it. Some use a semi-colon to separate sentences that can stand alone; while others use a comma. I also noticed that other writers like to use long sentences. They just separate it with a comma. But others use a combination of long and short sentences. As what one professional writer told me, it would be best if I make my own style; something that makes me comfortable and realistic. That sounds good to me.

However, every feedback is important to me. I am grateful for it because it makes me grow. I will try to review my work again. Thank you for reading my e-book.

Have a great week!

Hi lgp904,

Thank you for reading my book. I really appreciate it. I hope your husband would like it, too. Please do share any lessons you may have learned from it.
I will send you a copy with my picture and signature. lol! just kidding :-D
Best regards to your family.

Thank you to shani80 and kathyrabonnash for clicking the star sign. Very much appreciated.

Hi Tin,hope you can send/mail me a copy of the book with your signature gid.

God really will not give trials that we cannot handle. In my lifes journey, it is really, really true! Hope I can share it to you also. I really can relate to the story. I like your book. I will share it to my husband also.

Hi fiddle10, jessicajones, mshorror, & jetski,

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and the star sign. Please do share the lessons that you may have learned from the story.
Have a great week!