finally finished it. great ending, man. i hope you'll have a go at my finished story and lemme know what you think. good luck in the contest!

Just read the first 15 entries. I'm enjoying the gradual development of the husband...definitely got me hooked to finish it, which I'll do in a day or two. I'm gonna let the story stew in my head until then.

LOL. You have a great head start. I'm enjoying the read. Keep up the great work!

I'll be taking a look at this in the next week or so!