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A white man said, "Colored people are not allowed here." The black man turned around and stood up. He then said: "Listen sir....when I was born I was BLACK When I grew up I was BLACK, When I'm sick I'm BLACK, When I go in the sun I'm BLACK, When I'm cold I'm BLACK, When I die I'll be BLACK. But you sir. When you are born you're PINK When you grow up you're WHITE, When you're sick, you're GREEN, When you go in the sun you turn RED, When you're cold you turn BLUE, And when you die you turn PURPLE. And you have the nerve to call me colored?"
*Paste this on your profile if you dislike racist people

Omg You're 11!!!! You seem so mature

To Get A Laugh
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.(>o<) IT'S MY COOKIE!!!
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(> )>o Then i said sharing is caring....
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.(>o<) I LIKE COOKIES!!!
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(> <) So then I ate it...sorry.

Re-post this if you like cookies

I got this from Daisuke's profile, he got it from Darkness's profile

Thanks for the request little one :) http://data.whicdn.com/images/35805733/original.jpg

_♥__♥_____♥__♥___ Put This
_♥_____♥_♥_____♥__ Heart
_♥______♥______♥__ On Your
__♥_____/______♥__ Page If
___♥____\_____♥___ You Had
____♥___/___♥_____ Your Heart
______♥_\_♥_______ Broken
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16 year old boy asks his Mom:
"Mom, what are you going to get
me for my 18th birthday?"
The Mother answers, "son
that's still a long way"
.
The boy turns 17 and one day he
faints.
His Mom takes him to the hospital
and the doctor said
"Madam your child has a bad
heart." Being the child On
the stretcher the child says,
"Did she tell you I'm going to die?"
Mom Starts crying
The boy finally recovers on
his 18th Birthday, he comes
home and on his bed was a
letter his mom had left him.
The letter said "Son if you are
reading this it's because
everything went well.
Remember the day you asked me
what was I giving
you on your 18th birthday and
didn't know what to answer
you? Well, I gave you my heart take
care of it, and happy Birthday
Son"
The mother was dead because she had
to give up her heart to her son.
Nothing is bigger than a mom's
Heart...
~If you are touched please repost this on your profile.
Nightmare Moon from Daze, Daisuke from Nightmare Moon, Sarah E. Sackett from Daisuke

That girl you just called fat? She's over dosing on diet pills.
That girl you just called ugly? She spends hours putting on makeup just so people may like her.
That boy you just tripped? He gets abused enough at home.
That girl you told to kill herself? She was found yesterday hanging in a tree.
That boy you told to kill himself? He cut open his wrist, he's now on life support.
Remember the man with the ugly scars? He fought for our country.
Remember that woman with the distorted face? She was in a gas explosion.
People don't have to hurt...
~Re-post this on your page if you’re against bullying.~
99% of you won't.
I did.
(Thank you Nala Darkwing)

hi sarah,

World of Dragons- good cover, like the "actual egg", (suggests a love/hate relationship with eggs) also hints at origin of the dragon from egg. Also like the name Twauges,

correction to text, Opal's "throat." Generally good names for characters and plot develops well. Wood descriptions good.

note -two types of wood; the Greenwood ie with open glades usually pleasant the sort Robin Hood is depicted in, and the Mirkwood, which has a dense canopy , can be threatening as in Hansel and Gretel.

Castles usually have more imposing names such as Duart Castle, or Loch Leven Castle or Castle, Tantallon Castle see
Search Results

Castles in Scotland | VisitScotland
https://www.visitscotland.com/about/history/castles/

But there are many castles in Germany Ireland, England and other parts of Europe some large, some scary ,some cute and small such as Lindisfarne Castle.
I stayed in a huge one this summer called Brancepeth Castle,with doors 12 feet high!

Don't worry about the spelling too much . you might just be wizzing along when you are writing and the spelling goes - it can be corrected later. spell check is not perfect . If the word you put down is an actual word then although you meant something else it will not correct it eg bow and bough. If you can get someone to check the spelling -trouble is they then often then interfere with way you want to write!

i use Ivona Reader a read back programme as reading back often highlights not just spelling errors but word order probs etc. Reading out loud to a sibling or parent is another option . Reading does help with style as a story should be capable of being read. Reading out loud helps with commas -you know where you are supposed to take a breath or pause for effect.

There is a deeper level to dragons; In western folklore the dragon symbolised the feminine , the old earth mother religion. The killing of the dragon by St George and others was a sadly a symbolic triumph of the male dominated religion over the female. (see destruction of the Oracle of Delphi)

I think you see dragons as familiars, supporters,like an invisible friend. So your dragon is not over scary , In China dragons are positive good luck symbols. In China belief centred round keeping a balance between the feminine and the male; this is symbolised by the Dragon and the Phoenix bird .The Dragon there is Yang (male )and the Phoenix bird Yin (female). Although their Dragon is male it is benevolent yet powerful .

i have only done one dragon story. Its called the Black Dragon and it is a love story set in early China and involves a ghost, a princess and a dragon river.

Probably you have now gone to sleep in a fire proof bed like you brilliantly invented for your dragon!
best wishes
wildgoose.

Because I know how annoying it is to find a what looks like a good book and realize (in my case) that it is written in German, I am going to publish my books in both English, German, and if I can Spanish.