Great story and very good writing. Interesting read.

This book was really good :D I like the whole concept and I think you should make it longer or something:)

Wowzzers!! i loved it!

Very nice story!

u should really write more it's really good

its really a very good book!

its really a very good book!

this story rocks..please continue the book

this story was too shortand went along too fast for there to be any imagination

can you write more to go with it. I loved what you have written so far.