I knew someone who was sexually abused. She was messed up. Nice story.

You are an excellent writer. The story was compelling and kept me interested to the end. You got a vote and a star from me. God Bless

I feel that your story is very well written, and absolutely compelling. I did not see the ending coming, and i'm glad for that. You did fantastic. Good Luck with the contest. I most definitely voted for yours.
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The only complaint I have is the ending was rather abrupt. I had a hard time transitioning from Adam being a wonderful memory to the monster. It really touched me, though. Maybe it helps that my boyfriends name is Adam, but her tender memories of him - I know those feelings, I have felt them. The connection was wonderful.

I'm always impressed by the talent of people so young. I'd love to say I wrote this well at 15, but I'd probably be lying. Kudos!

How is paranormal literature doing in the publishing market now days?

Interesting subject, but not enough to hold my interest. This is because I write paranormal literature. You will need to remember to indent your paragraphs and have them in font size 12 Roman Text. Publishers do take this in consideration to a decision in publishing your work. other than that great subject.

Blessings

This was a fantastic read. Compelling from start to finish, and it's refreshing to read one with proper grammar and prose, enough to keep me interested in the story as a whole. you are a fantastic writer. Keep em coming.

I think you have a lot of potential as a writer. Keep writing stories like this, and you could go far!

As i am not much of a reader but i love short stories,
This one captured me till the end :)

good read ;)