*smirk* seriously...how is this chick? a 30 year old and a 19 year old ? :(

what was the point of her doing that with them?

great book let me know if you finish it

It's fairly good,but too many typographical errors

Not toobad...Many typographical errors.but you get the "thrust" of the story !!!

-you spelled against incorrectly :P
But overall it was a cool story...

well first of all its to short and 2nd of all u dident give to much detail

I agree with them it's too short

It was good but, it needs to be longer.

too short