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joeparente

Very well done!! You have been at this a spell I can tell. You have a star from me !!/Joe Parente

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lovingempath

I love it when this happens...:)
Very well written and exceptionally entertaining. I loved everything about this story Tyrone.
Good luck!

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tariq.summeiyya

Thank you for reading my story and leaving your comments! It is most appreciated!

God Bless,

Tyrone

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Gelöschter User

I felt that this book was great! I could picture everything you described. I think the most well developed character was Sparky. The way you conveyed his emotions was amazing! One of the best short stories I have read on Bookrix. Good luck with it! :)