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Wanted to give it a positive comment. How do I do that? It's obvious today is my first day in the maze!
Hello Tyrone, Congratulations on your win! A very poignant story with a wonderful message! Cleo
Thank you for your comments skater7786...I agree, it doesn't read as fiction and most of it is non-fiction. That "defining moment" when I walked away from it all, is 100% correct - I will never forget that day. The ending, from the crash at the school and to the conclusion, is the reason why I called it fiction, because four of my friends didn't suffer a physical death - it was more of a symbolic death as to where they ran... mehr anzeigen
That ending really hits hard. Good story but it is definitely not a work of fiction. It's too powerful for that.
Sad and probably very true I would guess.
your story feels like it is told from your knowledge of other people's stories about hard times on the streets. frankly i was a bit disturbed by the ending of needing to save everyone and helps us find jesus. it would be great if this could happen for everyone, but this scenario is less than likely to actually happen.
This story is told from my knowledge of my story about hard times on my street. It is not based on others stories, it's based on a defining moment in my life that was 100% real. I knew the people to call on and the places to go if I wanted to live this dangerous life and make a... mehr anzeigen
Wonderful story of redemption and salvation.
Thank you for your comment!
God Bless!
Tyrone
Thank you for reading and thank you for your comments!
God Bless!
Tyrone
Great story and congratulations!
Michele
Thank you for your reading my story and leaving your comments - it means a lot to me to be able to get this message out!
If you write any more let me read them please. I will be on here more now. I just moved then lost a dog to cancer.
Have a great day! :D
Inspiring.story told in such way that it appears like real life incident.Superb.Thank you for making me to think about "born again ".
Pressed At All Sides is a true story - the crash that claimed the lives of four of my friends was actually a "crash" into the world of drugs... Everything up to the crash is 100% true but the death was a different type of death. I walked away from that life just in time, thank... mehr anzeigen
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I hope that this helps,
Tyrone