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dawgirl

This should open alot of eyes. Well written and draws you into the story. Loved it !

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tariq.summeiyya

Thank you for your comments! I've answered messages in other forums but I'm a little late doing so in this discussion forum...Thank you!!!

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jetski

Nicely written. God bless.

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tariq.summeiyya

May God bless you and your family as well!!

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rdlarson

A beautiful story with truth and real confession and redemption for all. Well-written and carefully told, it's a pleasure to read.

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tariq.summeiyya

Thank you for reading and thank you for the excellent topic!! :-)

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quicksilver

Terrific!!

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cleveland

The story is one I can relate to. It is the typical 'if only' syndrome. Whe we know what is happening it is often too late. Well done
Cleveland

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tariq.summeiyya

Thank you for reading!

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edtheauthor

Good lesson in life to be learned at the earliest date possible.

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tariq.summeiyya

This is based on a true story and I've seen many of my friends "crash and burn" playing the "game" and also many who have taken another road to safety.

Thank you for your input! :-)