it may just be my dumb computer but I tried several times to read your book and all the pages were blank. At any rate I like the referances to romeo and juliet,there were already quite a few in your blurb. I'll try to read it again later and give you an actual comment.

i havent been able to finish it yet,sadly, but i am in the beginning of the book, and i love it. it is a very good page turner,which is why it pains me to put my laptop down now.good job,keep it up!

Thanks for re-reading it and giving it a second chance, I been rewriting this book so many times and I hope everyone will enjoy the book much as you did

-S

I have re-read your book and the slight changes have affected it extremely well. I love your plot and whole story concept, a wonderful read all together, cannot wait for more. exceptional read keep up the awesome work.

Let that vote total stand!

You stick with it!

thanks the cover i have in mind google doesnt have it so i had to use this and the butterfly is used later in the story so i had to make a few changes. Thanks for the advice :)

A great idea for a story, first just in my opinion I would change your cover because it doesnt seem to do your story justice, also remember describe your story dont report it. A great start awesome.