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Susie Q Whitmer

Wow, comparing me to Hitchcock... I love you Lol. Thank you for reading and I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

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Rgabel

I must admit this was hauntingly different. Well written, good dialog, definitely plot twists. Still trying to figure out which was real. You and Hitchcock have something in common! Good job. Robynn

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Susie Q Whitmer

I really appreciate the support and thanks for the feedback <3

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joeparente

well done. it was a different way that I would expect to read a diary but you nailed it! VOTE and STar./joeparente

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Susie Q Whitmer

Hi,
Thanks for reading,I'm happy that you enjoyed it.. thanks for voting. And yes, it is quite possible, I beleive.

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Susie Q Whitmer

Thank you for your review and I do agree, it was slightly difficult to do this story in diary form, but I am happy that you enjoyed it. <3

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mikwjpw

Adj. 1. unorthodox - independent in behavior or thought

So when I say unorthodox I don't mean it in a bad way. I just mean it standouts... IN A GOOD WAY. No buddy wants to be like everyone else. Good work!

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Susie Q Whitmer

Thank you so much for the response. You are the first to give me feedback and I'm happy that it's good feedback : )
I appreciate you taking the time to read my story <3

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mikwjpw

I must say its a good read on story alone. Its written a little unorthodox compared to what most expect when reading a journal, but the theme, the characters, and the plot shine. I would love to see this expanded upon. Maybe one day you can add to it, making it a normal narrative. You get my vote :)

<3

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felixthecat

Excellent Susie Q. Really, a terrific plot with all those twists and turns...and the ending! I was NOT expecting that.
Well done. Kudos:)

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