please finnish this story!!! its really, REALLY good!!!

love once forgoten please write more. LOVED IT!

it is a beautiful book can't wait for the next chapters

i like it i hope there more

I looove what you added! Now I'm jumpping around because I want to know what happens next!

You've got something good here. I really like it. I like the way it flows, too. There are some errors but nothing too noticeable, you know, nothing that prevented me from being able to understand where you were going with things. I like the memories part on the last couple of pages, I can almost see it in my head as she’s whispering and he’s turning trying to figure out what’s going on. To be honest I really like it. And I mean I say that about most stuff( OMG I love this! OMG look at those shoes! I love!! Omg his hair!! Lol) but I actually REALLY like this one. I’m picky with my books though. (rambling) You’ve got something going for ya here lol keep it up Oh! And update me when you do please??
~Nina~

I think you have the beginnings of a good story here. I did find some spelling and grammar errors, we all have them. This was interesting and with a little polishing it will be better.

Please continue X) You left such a cliff-hanger :(( Please let me know when more is up :D I hope Ben finds out about his past ^=^

Continue continue continue! pleeeeaaaasssseee