Thanks for this Janice. A beautifully descriptive and unique story. Thoroughly enjoyable.

Yet again your descriptive phrases painted a terrific picture. The writing held my interest as I turned the pages.Reading your story was truly a treat for me.

Janice, once again you dazzle me with how well you capture air and light and desert! Color and music, and the soft undercurrent of romance. I get so caught up in your lovely descriptions.
Strange...as i read I got the strongest feeling that you had REALLY experienced this frighteningly beautiful night, and then made a blood promise. An intriguing,wonderful "story". :)

Like the rhythms of the desert itself, your prose moves like a musical dream with sharp edges and silken images. Wow. I'm blown away. What a gorgeous work this is! This one definitely gets saved to my Favorites!

Imaginative, beautifully written...another gem from Janice Abel. For a moment I thought, "Could this be true?" And then, of course, I realized it was just another superbly written story by one of our finest.

so did your story.

I was luxuriating in your coloring in the spaces with those gorgeous descriptions of the New Mexico skies as day turns to night and then back to day, when you brought in the cowboy and his reason for living.

I have not been fortunate with time enough to read all your stories but in all your stories I have read, you surprise and delight. You rank among my favorite authors on and off site.