Your poetry is truly breathtaking and beautiful.
Chris

great rhythm - lovely message - sad. look forward to reading more of your work.

Exceptional prose, Jazz. There is a musical quality in this piece that I really liked very much. The last two lines of the ending stanza rather made me sad, though!
P

I can see you are a gifted writer.

Love the poem!

Lovely, poignant word images enhanced by the beautiful background - well done!

Well done..truly beautiful in verse and presentation.
I believe this is your best work yet.
Laz