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beginingtoend

i liked it :) you shud deff. continue :D

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mizzmichaelrip

I feel as though you should finish writing i felt it was a good begining but now im ready for some action lol gl hope u write more

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storyteller4

It seems a keeper. I will continue reading if you let me know.

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angelapriest

Let me know when u add more to this ok.