I just want to let you know ,how much I am loving your book!
With love \sakura

good book

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were is the rest of the book

I think this book will truly be a wonderful book.

One of the best independent novels I have read to date. The story line and idea for this book is something seldom done or even done correctly for that matter. It's an abusive modern day Cinderella story with a soap box twist. I loved the overall concept.

Your writing is detailed and well constructed in terms of grammar and syntax. The evolution of Kate throughout the novel is brilliant, but it lacks a few things. A rags to riches story, especially when it's surrounded with a pattern of abuse is probably something numerous small town girls in middle America can relate too, however, he traumas aren't near as descriptive as her victories in meeting and living with Noah. Therefore some of the victories like her new school experience and love life with Noah don't seem as intense. Could be something to work on in the future.

Also, Kate's dad needs expounded upon. His actions shaped and molded Kate for 16 years, and I understood his abrasive undertones and sick mentality, just not as well as I could have. Noah also needs some fleshing out. Remember, you started Kate and Noah's relationship as one of obligation. It's worth adding a bit more realism and raw emotion.

All in all, I loved it. The devil however is in the details and I would have liked more details about the lives of the main characters and how they manipulate the settings around them.
Really good work in the grand design of the book so far though. I feel privileged to have read it. Thank you.

loved it

i like the format of the text abd when ur done with the book i want u to tell me cause i WANT READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please write more, this is really good, but it would be amazing if it was finished!!!

luv the book pls wriite more