After this is edited and re-edited a hundred times over, this book can be something very special. The ideas are amazing.
I found it very difficult to keep reading - don't pay any attention to it - it is just that as a HS teacher, read a thousand works each year that look just like this. Once grammatical errors, and sentence structures errors are looked at and revised, this could be good.
Keep on writing, and listen to little... mehr anzeigen
After this is edited and re-edited a hundred times over, this book can be something very special. The ideas are amazing.
I found it very difficult to keep reading - don't pay any attention to it - it is just that as a HS teacher, read a thousand works each year that look just like this. Once grammatical errors, and sentence structures errors are looked at and revised, this could be good.
Keep on writing, and listen to little things your English teacher always seems to be hammering on every day.
Best of luck!