Hi i'm Arya

Vengeance being chase by them and they tell her to take her weapons off and she says no and they kill her only daughter

Its okay lol

So, do u have any suggestion for my book ill really appreciate it.

Hi :)

Thanks for the heart.

cool

ALSO THAT FACT THAT YOUR STORIES COME FROM YOUR DREAMS I FIND THAT REALLY INSPIRING KEEP IT UP!!!

well honestly i think its really intresting but try a lttle more detail but for the most part I LOVE IT!!!!!!

the nemesis part