Review - Sorry, couldn't resist and evil chuckle! Definitely a spin on this tale. I have always enjoyed your writing, and this time was no different. There is more to you than meets the eye! LOL A great story and I wish you luck in the contest. Robynn

I would like more on this story. Does the tarantula shows up later, unexpectedly? What happens next after the husband is rescued? It kept me intersted, and that's always a good thing. I would love it more if it was extended.

Great Job!
Indira

Nice little twist you put on this story. Good work!

Flash fiction indeed! Short and complete with a nice diabolical ending. I really enjoyed this.