I love how most of the first one was dialogue. You put together a beautiful story. It received my vote
-Angely

With all you do for so many of the young writers on this site, I'm always happy when you make time to read my latest.Thanks for the vote and the heart.

You have my vote & heart. Chris

I am always pleased to have a new member( to me) read my work and like it enough to vote, and save it.

For reading my stories and voting for them.

read this last night, wow! It was real, touching and sad, You got my vote!

I think we all know kids who are so hungry for someone to love them, and they are so anxious to grow up. They leave the ones who really care and love them. Some are lucky enough to go home to those who love them unconditionally.

Well done. Good insight into this tragedy.

A tale of life told well in three drabbles. Sad but true in many cases. Well done.

Tough story...yes, of innocence...yet, fortunately with a happy ending.