Returning to vote

nice story. I enjoyed it all the way through!!

Very well constructed and extremely well told. Your character development in so short a number of pages was impressive, and the story had a good, steady, exciting pace. Best of luck with the contest!

Good pace, good character development. You put me in this woman's shoes and I walked through to the very end. Good luck on the contest.

Just completed this delightful tale- fast paced and I especiallly like that. Clear character development; setting realistic. I was at the airport at the beginning and with Grams and John felt this young woman's emotions as you brought story to interesting last scene. Good job. Best of luck in the contest.

Good, fast-paced story that moved along nicely. I liked the ending...and wish you all the best in the contest. Well done.

Thanks for being there and all of the editing you did. Now you can relax. Have a glass of milk and a cookie.

I'm always glad when you enjoy my work, and I did enter it.

You thought hard on this one..and I loved it:)

Great, tight story...hope you entered it. I kept my interest all the way through.