I think this is one of my favorites so far!!

I want to thank all of you for your kindness and reading my poem. I will hold all of your comments close to my heart. Serena

As the poem is very touching & accordingly your comments are very close to the heart.

Thank you

The poem is romantic that it brings all the moments recalled of life when this really happened with me.
The poem is universally true for all.

Excellent work.

Beautifully written- takes me in with ev ery breath. Good piece

perfect Title, I felt longing and desire in each and every word. Great Job!

That was awesome I loved it:) Great style of writing I will love to read more of your writing.

Brilliantly written.