Thanks for reading my poem .Serena

Painted a beautiful picture in my mind as if I felt like I was there. Got my attention and curiosity up with the creative words you used. nice flow, thanks for sharing!

very imaginative with a nice twist and unexpected ending.

Thanks for reading I am glad you like it.Serena

It is very well written. I like a poem when it moves me and this one did. Good job!

Thanks again as you read your way through the night. Serena

Thanks your words sound good to me thank you for stopping by and reading my work. Serena

I liked the poem, very compelling and made me thoughtful, that's the best way I can think to describe it.

Wow. I appreciate your comments.Serena

You are so faithful reading and complimenting my work. Thank you Serena